Verb drill

A French writing revision log you can use again

Turn one corrected French sentence into a useful log entry: meaning, checked version, reason and a fresh prompt. Try six short retrieval drills.

In short

Save four things: what you meant, the checked French, why it changed and a fresh prompt. That last prompt gives you something to write when you return to the entry.

Yellow the idea to rememberBlue French to learn

A learner reviews closed notebooks and a blank laptop at a quiet French writing desk.
A carnet de révision helps turn a correction into a new writing habit. Illustration: Atelier
One complete entry
FieldYour note
MeaningSay my age: twenty.
Draft — errorJe suis vingt ans.
Checked revisionJ’ai vingt ans.
ReasonFrench uses avoir for age.
Try laterSay that your brother is thirty.

Keep the draft clearly labelled as an error. When you revisit the entry, cover both the draft and the checked version. Read the meaning cue, write the French, then compare. A different age or subject makes you choose the form again.

How do you keep a French writing revision log?

Keep a small, usable set
MeaningChecked FrenchReason
Say my ageJ’ai vingt ans.Age uses avoir.
Say what I enjoyJ’aime lire.After aimer, the next verb is an infinitive.
Say I am unavailableJe ne suis pas libre.In this simple tense, ne… pas surrounds suis.

A good reason is short enough to use. “Infinitive after aimer” helps you choose between lire and lis. “My sentence was bad” gives you no action. Keep the intention beside the correction so that you remember whether you were declining, asking or describing.

1 · Use the logged pattern with a new subject or verb

  1. Mon frère trente ans. (avoir · present)
  2. Nous vingt-cinq ans. (avoir · present)
  3. Ma sœur aime . (écrire · infinitive)
  4. J’aime . (dessiner · infinitive)
  5. Tu n’ pas libre ce soir. (être · present)
  6. Nous ne pas disponibles demain. (être · present)

Label a change accurately

Three different reasons to revise
Kind of changeWhat to record
Grammar errorThe meaning cue, corrected form and a rule you can apply.
Missing detailThe information the reader needed, such as which day you mean.
Style choiceWhy you preferred one valid wording in this message.

For example, changing Salut ! to Bonjour Madame Martin, changes the greeting to suit a recipient. Label it “greeting for this email”. Keep context with a style choice; another conversation may need a different greeting.

Close the entry when it is usable

A self-review aid, not a grade. Ticks are not saved.