Reading

C1 French reading: make a newspaper correction visible

Follow a student newspaper’s Friday-to-Saturday correction, compare two editorial proposals and choose a precise public note supported by the exchange.

In short

The corrected day is Saturday. The debate is about making that change visible: B asks for a note, and C asks for wording that names the edit precisely. Compare the old day, the new day and what the team knows about readership.

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Three contributions to compare

Quelle note ajouter à l’article ?

A — Note interne de rédaction

L’article annonçait initialement1 la rencontre le vendredi. Après vérification auprès de l’organisation, nous avons remplacé ce jour par le samedi. Le titre et le reste de l’article sont inchangés. La première version a pu être partagée2 avant cette correction.

B — Proposition d’une étudiante

Corriger la date est indispensable, mais une modification silencieuse3 laisse les premiers lecteurs sans explication. Ajoutons une note indiquant ce qui a changé. Il ne s’agit pas de conserver une erreur comme si elle restait valable, mais de rendre la correction visible.

C — Réponse du responsable

Une note précise me paraît préférable à une formule générale du type « article mis à jour ». Évitons toutefois d’écrire que tous les lecteurs ont reçu une information fausse : nous ignorons qui a consulté quelle version. La transparence n’autorise pas à inventer la portée de l’erreur4.

Read it in English

The article initially announced the meeting for Friday. After checking with the organiser, we replaced that day with Saturday. The headline and the rest of the article are unchanged. The first version may have been shared before this correction.

Correcting the date is essential, but a silent change leaves initial readers without an explanation. Let us add a note saying what changed. The point is not to preserve an error as though it remained valid, but to make the correction visible.

A specific note seems preferable to a general phrase such as “article updated”. Let us avoid writing that all readers received false information: we do not know who consulted which version. Transparency does not authorise inventing the error’s reach.

On the student editor’s desk

Two editorial choices
ChoiceFrench wordingEffect for the reader
General update labelArticle mis à jour.Shows that something changed
Specific correctionLa rencontre aura lieu samedi, et non vendredi comme annoncé initialement.Names the exact old-to-new change

Now draft the public correction

Write at least 40 French words for the note to add to the article. Specify the correction, say that the headline and remaining text are unchanged, and apologise to readers. Compare your wording with this compact example.

Rectificatif : après vérification auprès de l’organisation, nous précisons que la rencontre aura lieu samedi, et non vendredi comme annoncé dans la première version. Le titre et le reste de l’article restent inchangés. Nous présentons nos excuses aux lecteurs pour cette erreur.

Correction: after checking with the organiser, we clarify that the meeting will take place on Saturday, rather than Friday as announced in the first version. The headline and the rest of the article remain unchanged. We apologise to readers for this error.

Review your public note

A self-review aid, not a grade. Ticks are not saved.

Question 1No account needed
Which event day is current?

Choose one answer.

Answer and explanation

Saturday.. A reports that Friday was replaced by Saturday after a check with the organiser.

Question 2No account needed
How does C respond to B?

Choose one answer.

Answer and explanation

C supports a precise note and adds a limit on readership claims.. C favours a specific explanation and says the team does not know who saw each version.

Question 3No account needed
What does a pu être partagée establish?

Choose one answer.

Answer and explanation

Possible earlier sharing.. The phrase expresses a possibility; it gives no measure of circulation.

Question 4No account needed
Which public note is fully supported?

Choose one answer.

Answer and explanation

Rectificatif : la rencontre aura lieu samedi, et non vendredi.. The supported edit is Friday to Saturday; neither a weather cause nor total readership is supplied.